Steve is on (to) something

These words here, this is what happens when I get high

metaphora

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[inspired by Il Postino]

What if the world is just a metaphor for something else?

Skies exclaiming man’s puny dreams

The seas our limited potence

If rain is all our angst and pain

And sun our toils and labor

(unfinished)

Written by steve

15 January 2006 at 11:44 am

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  1. nice! :D

    rain

    15 January 2006 at 12:06 pm

  2. thanks! i really don’t know how to finish this though.

    noromyxo

    15 January 2006 at 2:18 pm


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